That’s a lot better and so much more interesting. Well done. Looks great.
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I love everyone’s attempts tbh. Providing they are an amateur.
I love to see guys try different angles & rotations, adding music / SFX, intro/outros, titles. I love it all 
Feedback from me is that the opening scene is too long. Tunnel is great so after the tunnel a speed ramp to where you start to rise would be good, simply bcos you didn’t rise sooner.
But also remember, everyone likes different things. And the best advice I was given was “to write a plan”
Anyway, here’s my first real attempt (other than trying to make home holiday movies with a camcorder… Yes that was a Camera with a small tape that needed a larger VHS adapter to work😂)
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Thank you and I like your video of Ireland its given me some ideas for next time 
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