Hollywood Lodge, abandoned building

Really interesting. Not sure how long ago the fire gutted it, but clearly it has been used for a while as some kind of commune.

Feedback welcome. I know I could improve the smoothness. Maybe a bit too long?

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As a general rule don’t use shots more than 6 seconds in length unless there is a lot of movement. To keep interest you need to keep changing shots.
But saying I found it very interesting