Honest Comments Please

Short clip of the leeds liverpool flight of locks in Wigan

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Wow! Impressive, that water way is incredible, well captured :ok_hand:

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Superb mate ! Absolutely loved that vid well done !

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Very nice !

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Very nice I have been to Wigan a few times and loved the walks around the canals

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Great video, amazing how interesting a canal lock really is when filmed well

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great video that bring back some pleasant memories of my narrow boating days. I would have chosen a less dramatic musical accompaniment. But that is down to personal taste I guess.

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I have a couple of points.
You have some great shots, but just as I was getting interested in them you cut to something else.
I’m not personally fond of edits where the footage speeds up, it can be effective if it is used to lead you to or from a part of the story you are telling.
And as already mentioned, I’m not sure dramatic music suits the edit.
I like the way you kept the edit to a reasonable length, usually less is more but in this case I would loved to have seen a little more.

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Thanks for the feedbacm timmyp

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To add to what @timmyp has said the start is a bit abrupt, perhaps fade in the video and music and rather than a straight cut to the next clip dissolve from one to another maybe.
I also don’t think the scene is dramatic enough for the music choice.